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Post by zuberi on Oct 30, 2007 11:10:21 GMT -5
The poor little lion carried on. He hadnt eaten in days. He was growing weaker. His feet hurt from traveling so far from home. He looked around. He went to walk on but he couldnt. He just layed down tired. The sun beat down on him. Summer was hotter then he thought. Parched and Famished the cub had a flight of valtures circling him. |
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Post by ♥ Jade ♥ on Oct 30, 2007 11:23:05 GMT -5
Next time try to make it longer please. At least four lines.
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Simba looked down from his spot at the top of Pride Rock. He watched as the young cub struggled to carry his weight further and further onto his land. He didn't reconize this cub, he was not from around here. The cub looked so helpless and tired. The king sighed to himself. He had no lioness to care for the cub, that would mean he would have to deal with the cub by himself. It's not that he hated cubs or anything it's just he couldn't bring himself to care for them after what happened to Kiara. He shook his mane to clear his mind.
He made his way down the rocks slowly to not scare the cub. He silently picked up the cub by the scruff of his neck and carried him up to the dens. He laid him down by a puddle of water and silently toke off towards a familiar place to ask a friend a favor. Leaving the cub alone in the den... |
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Post by zuberi on Oct 30, 2007 11:41:30 GMT -5
The cub felt the coolness fall over him in his sleep. He woke up and sat up looking around. He was in a cave. But how? he saw a small puddle of water and crawled to it. He licked it up. When he was finished he looked around. It smelt of other lions but he was alone. Did he get here on his own? He rised and looked around the cave. The coolness of the rock beneath his feet felt good. He roared his little cub roar and continued to sniff around. |
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Post by ♥ Jade ♥ on Oct 30, 2007 11:54:53 GMT -5
Getting closer... once you do it a few times it'll just come naturally... You'll see... Just be a bit more descriptive.
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He walked onto his territory, back from his short walk to Guylian's Island. A lioness followed close behind him and four cubs playfully jumped at their legs while they walked. He couldn't care for a cub but Maha sure could. With five of her own she had plently of experience. He nodded her towards where he left the cub and walked back up Pride Rock.
The lioness bowed her head in respect to Simba. He deserved the respect for what he's done for his lands. Come cubs, the abandoned one is this way... She walked towards the open den to find him walking around curiously. I wonder where he came from... She was a beautiful female with a kind face. She looked out for everyone, it was in her nature to be the motherly type. After all... she was a mother. She cleared her throat so to speak. Child what is your name? she asked kindly. Her cubs shifted uncomfortably at her side. They were told to not speak until she allowed them. Maha knew that they must be dying to ask questions, expecially her little Ariel. She watched the loner cub carefully to wait for him to speak. |
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Post by zuberi on Oct 30, 2007 12:03:58 GMT -5
Hearing a voice he backed up into a wall. He was slightly frightened but then realized it was his own kind. He stepped forward and pushed his chest up boldly. I am Zuberi I come from the savanna feilds. Why do you ask? he said taking a seat. He wasnt scared. He was bold for being a lone cub. He watched the big lion then looked at the ones his own size. He perked both his ears then looked back to the bigger lion. He was still wondering how he got into this cave. Zuberis tummy growled but not loudly. He flicked the tip of his tail. He still had his chest up bravely. He wasnt intimidated at all. |
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Post by ♥ Jade ♥ on Oct 30, 2007 12:10:17 GMT -5
Ok that's better... You can reply here and then join a thread at Guylian's Island after if you want... because that's where you are heading lol 
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She looked the cub up and down. He must be starving. Well I'm Maha and these are my cubs, Lencho, Taylor, Luigi and Ariel. As she said their names they each toke their turn in nodding to Zuberi. There was one cub which was much larger then the rest. He stood by his mother and barely even acknoledged the cub. This was Lencho, the eldest. He was older then his siblings by two seasons. The smallest, a wide-eyed hyper little female walked up to Zuberi curiously. She was the little chatterbox of the family and she couldn't contain herself any longer. Maha knew she was going to burst.
The little tike sneaaked away from her siblings and peered into Zuberi's huge orbs. Before anyone could say anything she burst into a hysterical giggle. You have the biggest eyes I have ever seen! You are so funny looking! She continued to giggle and before no time she was on her back in a wide mouth laughter.
Maha swiped at her daughter and grabbed a hold of her. What has gotten into you Ariel! Mind your manners! She glanced around checking to see if the King was watching. Oh forget it, he was always watching... She hushed Ariel and turned back to the forgotten cub. Come dear... she said before walking out of the cavern. She was going home, to Guylian's Island where she can properly care for the cub until another lioness would come along. |
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Post by zuberi on Oct 30, 2007 18:04:25 GMT -5
He watched the female look at him then laugh. He rolled his eyes at her laughter. He didnt think it was very funny. He looked at the others and noticed the oldest. He seemed interesting. The others seem to be to scared to even come close. He followed behind the family. As he exited the cave he looked up to the might lion who must have saved him. He nodded to him then walked on. He seem to stay seperate from the others though. He was more braver. He wished he could be back with his family but he knew that wasnt going to happen. Perhaps if this doesnt work out he could come back to his savoir. He wasnt afraid of what was coming. He was just affraid it wouldnt work. He just wanted to be home |
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